You are due to start new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter
• Explain your situation
• Describe your problems
• Tell him/her when you think you can start
Dear Sir,
I apologize for not being able to join by next week due to some procedural delays. Let me explain in detail.
To elucidate my current employer has requested me to extend the notice period by an additional week due to delay in the relieving as well as the handover process. Additionally, my mover who had promised to get the relocation done to Bangalore by the end of the week has delayed the collecting of goods due to unavailability of the cargo truck.
Although I can understand that you were expecting me to be on board by next week however due to procedural delays from my existing employer and unexpected delay from my mover on the relocation part I request you to delay my joining by an additional week so that I can close all the pending works and join in the first week of May.
I look forward to your response and support on this matter.
Yours sincerely
Saud
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I apologize for not being able to join b...
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Line 7, column 60, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur response and support on this matter. Yours sincerely Saud
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Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pport on this matter. Yours sincerely Saud
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, look, may, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 732.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54658385093 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68370423687 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 127.690721649 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577639751553 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.660298674 44.8134815571 227% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 104.571428571 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 4.34317383033 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188317685942 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858031558517 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526860491697 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101346752594 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420370774557 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.