Dear Gozie,
How are you and how has life been generally? It's been a really long time since I last heard from you. Guess what? I have just gained admission into a college in Cape Brenton to study Logistics and Supply chain management. It is expected that I resume on or before the 15th of may, 2021.
Gozie I would really need your help with obtaining a part-time job, as you know I have recently lost my parents hence, I no longer have my support system. I have been able to raise funds to cater for my fees, accommodation and feeding but, will still need some money for books and all other academic expenses.
This is where you come in, as a long time immigrant in the country, I believe you have become very familiar with the terrain and may be able to aid me as regard my job search. I have no doubt that you could help recommend me to some of your friends and guide with designing my résumé.
I can't wait to see you in Canada soonest!
Cheers,
Grace
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 277, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'may 2021'.
Suggestion: may 2021
... that I resume on or before the 15th of may, 2021. Gozie I would really need your help...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 3, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... and guide with designing my résumé. I cant wait to see you in Canada soonest! C...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, really, so, still, no doubt, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32967032967 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24380428069 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664835164835 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.9981372209 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5555555556 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 4.34317383033 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260914240499 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903139093754 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659757962878 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150460976011 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392849758414 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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