You are going on holiday next week and you need to ask your friend to watch your dog while you are away.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
• state how long you will be away
• tell them what needs to be done
• state how you will compensate them
Hi Dave,
How are you doing? Hope everything is fine there. I’m just writing this quick letter to ask great favour from you. Well, I know you are a busy person but I really believe you could help me with this.
We will be going on holiday to Thailand next week. Just want to ask you is it ok to keep our doggie Jazz for 1 week till we come back. You don’t have to worry much because Jazz is a very calm pet. I will give you all the foods and his cage. You just have to give it some water and probably take out him a little every day for a walk.
We know how much you love dogs and your son also could play with him because we have trained him to catch balls. We will bring something nice for you from Thailand. Also just do let me know if you need anything else from there. Will catch-up soon after we return.
Take Care
Jim
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 73, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
...hailand next week. Just want to ask you is it ok to keep our doggie Jazz for 1 wee...
^^
Line 13, column 166, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...g something nice for you from Thailand. Also just do let me know if you need anythin...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 693.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.125 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.78371912351 2.54303337028 70% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64880952381 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3760095077 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 49.5 76.5299724578 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.21428571429 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338946056145 0.216113520407 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116843418491 0.0766984524023 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645764429367 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233306152265 0.12726935374 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0146563652809 0.0580467560999 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.0 8.37731958763 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 93.14 70.7449484536 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.3 7.45979381443 44% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.79 8.71597938144 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.17 7.59969072165 68% => OK
difficult_words: 10.0 41.2886597938 24% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 8.15463917526 61% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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