You are going on holiday next week and you need to ask your friend to watch your dog while you are away.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
• state how long you will be away
• tell them what needs to be done
• state how you will compensate them
Dear Tenu,
How are you? Hope this letter finds you well. I would like to request you to look after my dog for next week when I will be away for my family trip.
I am having a business meeting in America and I have to leave next Friday (15th June) early morning and return after five days that is Tuesday night. I was thinking to extend my stay but cannot make it because my child’s school is going to open on the 1st of July.
I would like to be so thankful, if you can watch tipsy, I will be away. She is very calm and do not needs enough maintenance. All you will need to do is feed her twice a day and take her on a walk each evening. There is plenty of dog feed in the house.
If you can do this favor for me, I will be happy to take you and your wife out for dinner in a well-renowned restaurant named Punjabi Dhabba as I am aware of the fact that you love Punjabi food.
Let me know if you can help me out with this.
Warm Regards,
Jot
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 149, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... after five days that is Tuesday night. I was thinking to extend my stay but cann...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...is going to open on the 1st of July. I would like to be so thankful, if you ca...
^
Line 8, column 101, Rule ID: DONT_NEEDS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'need'?
Suggestion: need
...ll be away. She is very calm and do not needs enough maintenance. All you will need t...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 772.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.95897435897 4.54256449028 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.98532419596 2.54303337028 78% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630769230769 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4950779741 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.3333333333 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.91666666667 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35633732361 0.216113520407 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119062037083 0.0766984524023 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0961125202377 0.0603063233224 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182608828653 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11335347731 0.0580467560999 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 8.37731958763 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 89.08 70.7449484536 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.39 8.71597938144 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.81 7.59969072165 76% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 41.2886597938 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.