Dear Ms Sana,
I am writing this letter to express my interest in participating in the Business Strategies training programme that you are organizing in the UK next month.I always wanted to enhance my skills and learn more in this domain and I consider this as a excellent opportunity to do so.I noticed from a follow-up email that you are looking for volunteers to organize a social event and I offer myself for the role.
I have always been involved in many volunteer works right from college and have an increased expertise in organizing such events.I have organized a number of professional and personal events and is well aware of the duties and responsibilities of an event organizer. At my work, I am often responsible to plan important events, contact the event management team, arrange guest lectures and ensure smooth success of professional meetings. Hence I believe I would be the apt person for your social event as well.
I would therefore kindly request you to provide some additional details regarding the training session and the itinerary for the same so that I can contribute to the event right away
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Thanking You
Yours faithfully
Alice
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...you are organizing in the UK next month.I always wanted to enhance my skills and ...
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...e in this domain and I consider this as a excellent opportunity to do so.I notice...
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...nt and I offer myself for the role. I have always been involved in many volun...
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...sed expertise in organizing such events.I have organized a number of professional...
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...sed expertise in organizing such events.I have organized a number of professional...
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Suggestion:
...mber of professional and personal events and is well aware of the duties and resp...
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...mooth success of professional meetings. Hence I believe I would be the apt person for...
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Suggestion:
...king forward to hearing from you soon. Thanking You Yours faithfully Alic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, look, regarding, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05940594059 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83925457342 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623762376238 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 16.3608247423 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 127.775084513 44.8134815571 285% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 170.333333333 76.5299724578 223% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 33.6666666667 16.8248392259 200% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.0 4.34317383033 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281077303054 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123555384805 0.0766984524023 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068784767666 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136235922338 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722364496518 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 8.37731958763 229% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 70.7449484536 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 7.45979381443 217% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 8.71597938144 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 7.59969072165 130% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 8.62886597938 330% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 8.54432989691 178% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 8.15463917526 356% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.