You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser.
Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter
• expressing your interest in the role
• requesting more information about it
• explaining what experience you have
Dear Sir,
I, Miss. Phoebe Buffay from the Marketing Department of our organization have been invited for a month training to UK. With regards to this invitation, I hereby express my interest to be the social event’s organizer as the requirement is mentioned in the official mail.
As the training is just one month ahead, I request you to forward me the details of the venue and the time of this program, so as to make arrangements for the same. Also, it would be great if the itinery of this event is shared with every employee who has been selected for training which would give a clear picture to everyone.
Kindly note I have done many social help workshops across the city and had the opportunity to manage people and make the event run smoothly. Furthermore, I have 4 years of experience in various event organizing and I would definitely fit in for the role the company is looking out for this event.
Awaiting your reply
Regards,
Phoebe Buffay
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...the venue and the time of this program, so as to make arrangements for the same. Also, i...
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Line 4, column 211, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f experience in various event organizing and I would definitely fit in for the ro...
^^
Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ting your reply Regards, Phoebe Buffay
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72781065089 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64988357995 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633136094675 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.3754391083 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.875 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199994632248 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777725089258 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394308321273 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125711834728 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403705081039 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.