You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events’ organiser.
Write a letter to the Training Organiser
expressing your interest in the role
requesting more information about it
explaining what experience you have
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my interest in joining this years team as the events organiser. I' ve always had a major interest in managing a wide range of events. Moreover, this could help build my resume, which may open a great set of career opportunities in the long-run.
I kindly ask you to provide me with further information about the duties and responsibilities that the position offers, as I was not able to view the flyer last week due to internet problems at my workplace. Therefore, I would like to request a copy to be mailed to my registered address.
Furthermore, I offer a wide range of managerial experience which could be of a great asset towards the given vacancy. For instance, problem solving, attention to detail, and consistency are some of my strong traits. These may help add value towards attaining the job offer.
I look forward to hearing back from you!
Yours faithfully,
Matt Jones
Supervisor
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'events'' or 'event's'?
Suggestion: events'; event's
...erest in joining this years team as the events organiser. I ve always had a major inte...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87272727273 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85148777883 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.70303030303 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6199738374 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3333333333 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 4.34317383033 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0977052375992 0.216113520407 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378475786184 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381607293164 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0495777961386 0.12726935374 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230985510726 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.