Dear Sir or Madam,
I recently got admitted to your college next year and writing a letter to request accommodation in the college Hall of Residence for the upcoming academic year.
This will be my first year in the UK and I do not know anyone at the college. I will spend my first year in a Hall of Residence so that I can stay close to the campus. I would not like to share my room and prefer a suite room for a single female with an attached bathroom and kitchen. If the laundry is available then it would be an advantage.
I would like to request the meal using animal oil as I plant oil allergy. However, if the animal oil’s meal cannot provide, I will very much appreciate access to kitchen facilities that I prefer to cook myself.
Thank you for your assistance in advance. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Faithfully,
Chris Wong
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... with an attached bathroom and kitchen. If the laundry is available then it would ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 718.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45962732919 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4677699462 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621118012422 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5246087298 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.8 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283729698826 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985117679049 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0966479633571 0.0603063233224 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165481318442 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131617788601 0.0580467560999 227% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.