You are a member of an organization which meets regularly in a restaurant. The most recent meal you had was not satisfactory and you were very disappointed with the quality of food and the behaviour of the staff. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant.In your letter :
• Give details of reason for coming to the restaurant
• Explain what was wrong with the meal and the service
• Suggest what he/she could do to make you/your group return to the restaurant
Dear Mr John,
I hope this letter finds you in good health. I am writing to express my concerns about the recent meal I had at your restaurant.
To begin with, I am a member of the community’s environmental club and we regularly hold our month-end meetings at your restaurant. We were drawn to your restaurant after we tasted your chicken burger at our first meeting in June and it was delicious. Ever since we have continued to patronize your meals and outstanding services.
However, last week Tuesday, we had our first experience of awful staff behaviour and a low-quality meal. It was spaghetti pasta and it was too spicy. To make matter worse, we were served without drinks or water and when we called the waiter’s attention, she spent about 20 minutes getting some without any apologies for the delay. To be honest with you, it was a horrible experience and my team was disappointed. They complained bitterly that they decided to switch restaurants for our next meeting so as not relive the experience.
On the flip side, I begged the team on the behalf of the restaurant to reconsider their decision since it was our first experience. They agreed it had never happened before and requested that I write to inform you of the experience. Nonetheless, I would advise that you write to the team, assuring them that it would never happen again as it is against the culture and ethics of your restaurant. This would help restore the relationship we have with your restaurant.
Seeking your reply.
Best wishes,
Lilian.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr John, I hope this letter finds you in good hea...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, nonetheless, so, as to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 32.9175257732 164% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 937.175257732 137% => OK
No of words: 263.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87072243346 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76611200356 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58174904943 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 383.4 290.88556701 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8570211199 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0625 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4375 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3125 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248673178846 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769150871439 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050593648102 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158240251051 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03123732551 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr John, I hope this letter finds you in good hea...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, nonetheless, so, as to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 32.9175257732 164% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 937.175257732 137% => OK
No of words: 263.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87072243346 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76611200356 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58174904943 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 383.4 290.88556701 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8570211199 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0625 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4375 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3125 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248673178846 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769150871439 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050593648102 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158240251051 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03123732551 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.