Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope you are doing well!
I am writing this letter on behalf of all the group members regarding our practicing sessions in the community hall. We are a group of musicians that is named Rose. We gather in the hall every Tuesday and Friday to prepare for the next season of AGT that will start in the next few months. However, we have been told that no longer hall is available on those two days due to an theatre show that is going on.
I understand that Community Centres must give the priority to activities that have beneficial effects on the society. Let me explain how we fulfill this goal. All of us are young adults who have been working very hard for years to improve and achieve high levels of music. As you are no doubt aware, AGT is a famous talent show that will draw attention in all over the world and performing there can change our life. I believe the most important goal of each community is to provides this opportunity for all of people especially those who are economically weak, to grow and become successful people who can stand on their own feet.
We can clear our schedule and make free up time whenever the hall would be available. However, evenings and weekends are more convenient for us as we are working during the day.
Thanks in advance for all of your support. I look forward to hearing from you.
Your Faithfully,
Masoud
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 375, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...l is available on those two days due to an theatre show that is going on. I under...
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Line 5, column 475, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'provide'.
Suggestion: provide
... important goal of each community is to provides this opportunity for all of people espe...
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Line 5, column 581, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re economically weak, to grow and become successful people who can stand on their...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, regarding, so, well, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1133.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 252.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49603174603 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.346775206 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.930463543 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9285714286 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291132606835 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820635937904 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620064145121 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136227506653 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0848711548176 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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