You are planning a two-week vacation, and you need someone to take care o f your house while you are away. Write a letter to your neighbor.1 In your letter
• tell your neighbor that you are going away
• ask your neighbor to take care of your house for you
• explain what tasks you would like your neighbor to do
Dear Mr. Smith,
As I told you earlier that I am going for a two-week holiday to Miami starting 21st August, 2019 till 4th September, 2019. I will be travelling with my whole family during this period of time. But, I am a bit worried about my house in my absence. As you know, we have seen many burglaries happened in our locality in the last few years.
I would like to request you to please take care of my house in my absence to avoid any mishappening. I would be grateful to you if you could help me by taking care of my house. In my house, there are total four bedrooms and 4 balconies. Looking around in such as big house is very difficult for a single person.
You need to open the door every morning at 6 AM when my cleaner comes at this time. She is very polite and know her job very well, so you just need to monitor her activities. Also, I would be extermely grateful to you if you could water my plants daily, which are placed just outside drawing room.
I am looking forward to getting support from you.
Yours faithfully,
John Carberry
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'August 2019'.
Suggestion: August 2019
...two-week holiday to Miami starting 21st August, 2019 till 4th September, 2019. I will be tra...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'September 2019'.
Suggestion: September 2019
...ami starting 21st August, 2019 till 4th September, 2019. I will be travelling with my whole fam...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...elling with my whole family during this period of time. But, I am a bit worried about my house...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 108, Rule ID: KNOW_NOW[4]
Message: Did you mean 'now'?
Suggestion: now
...es at this time. She is very polite and know her job very well, so you just need to ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30845771144 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.320190206 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65671641791 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.676939584 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.6153846154 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4615384615 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247263602215 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854633193693 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612092327813 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125025202272 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376630645842 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.