You are An, the president of the youth club in your secondary school. On behalf of the members, write a letter to invite a famous person to give a speech at one of your club’s meetings. In your letter, you should:
- introduce your club
- give the reasons why you want to invite this person
- tell him/her about the arrangements for the meeting.
Dear Chi Pu,
How are you doing? I am the leader of the youth club in X secondary school. On behalf of all the members, it gives me great pleasure to invite you to deliver a
speech at my club’s meeting on this Saturday.
During quarantine, various students can not afford buying a tool to attend online classes, several poor people do not have enough money to purchase food, beverage
or to pay the rent. Our club is raising funds, collect clothes, necessary stuff on this auspicious occasion for poor people.
You are the right personality to deliver the speech as you have made major contribution to numerous medical institutes. Should you accept this invitation, we will make all the arrangements to pick you up and drop at your residential place. Your invited talk will be about one hour long, including a 10 minute question-answer session.
I hope you can make time to attend our meeting. Write back as soon as you can and tell me if you can come !
Yours sincerely,
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 52, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to buy'.
Suggestion: to buy
...antine, various students can not afford buying a tool to attend online classes, severa...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 809.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70348837209 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65085469975 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.709302325581 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9576535672 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380676047862 0.216113520407 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137878101284 0.0766984524023 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810596026944 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155772036648 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107793761582 0.0580467560999 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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