You are requested in applying for a scholarship program to study at a foreign university. Write a letter to enquire about the course
Explain which course you are interested in
Tell what you know about the university
Explain why you should receive the scholarship
Respected Sir,
Through this letter i want to query a course which was published On Last week in Dainik Bhaskar newspaper in editorial colimn.I am interested In doing course which was available in second column with heading for language schools.I really get mesmerised by The scholarship programme to study at a foreign university so I myself want to apply for the same course and the university which you have mention over there is the top university in my prospective.
Furthermore, you are requested to send me details of university where I would receive the scholarship.I hope, you will act upon my request And send me relevant information which is required as soon aa possible.
With a warm thanks
Sourabh Sharma
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...k Bhaskar newspaper in editorial colimn.I am interested In doing course which was...
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...olumn with heading for language schools.I really get mesmerised by The scholarshi...
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...y where I would receive the scholarship.I hope, you will act upon my request And ...
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...s soon aa possible. With a warm thanks Sourabh Sharma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
really, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 529.0 937.175257732 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 105.0 206.0 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0380952381 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.20108587294 3.78020617076 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75516418843 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 127.690721649 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.780952380952 0.622605031667 125% => OK
syllable_count: 162.9 290.88556701 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 12.6804123711 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 16.3608247423 214% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 139.633647648 44.8134815571 312% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 176.333333333 76.5299724578 230% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 35.0 16.8248392259 208% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26794644586 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12450007489 0.0766984524023 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895466707531 0.0603063233224 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188537800597 0.12726935374 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182798945218 0.0580467560999 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 8.37731958763 236% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 70.7449484536 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 7.45979381443 227% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 8.62886597938 342% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.0 8.54432989691 187% => OK
text_standard: 30.0 8.15463917526 368% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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