You are some friend want to start a weekly dance club and you have found a hall that would be suitable to hold your meeting.
write a letter to the owner of the hall. In your letter,
Explain your and your friends' project
Ask if it possible to rent the hall and under what terms
state what day and what times you would like to use the hall
Dear Sir/Madam,
I recently came across one of your advertisements about your hall and I would like to enquire about the same for our weekly dance club.
I hail from Anand which is stones throw away from your hall. Since the winter vacation is just around the corner, me and my friends have decided to start a weekly dance club. We are a renowned club and our forte is Jazz dance.
As the hall has recently opened, we wanted to formally ask whether it would be possible to rent the hall for such events? Also, we have never done it before so would you kindly inform us about the terms and conditions of renting the hall.
We are expecting the commence our sessions from the 4th of December when the winter break starts. According to the demand, we are going to need the hall for a couple of hours each day and morning time will be more preferable.
Hoping to have a prompt response from your end.
Yours sincerely,
Jocelyn Mascarenhas
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...f renting the hall. We are expecting the commence our sessions from the 4th of December w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 784.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58479532164 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27364329855 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625730994152 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3485332184 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 4.34317383033 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371950817916 0.216113520407 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132647773323 0.0766984524023 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764524199668 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185920158714 0.12726935374 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793134078682 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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