You are a student at an English language school in Brighton and are living in private accommodation with other flatmates. You’ve not had hot water or heating for some time. The landlord’s workmen have tried to fix the problem but without success.
Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter state your reason for writing, describe the problems and explain how you feel, propose a solution, and risk the landlord to take action.”
Dear Mr Thompson,
My name is Alex and I have been living in one of your properties located on Fairview Road from last 7 months. I am writing with regard to the malfunctioned heating and geyser system in my flat which is becoming a huge inconvenience for me as well as for other housemates too.
We all flatmates are experiencing two main problems. Firstly, the heating system trips down in the middle of the night that leaves us freezing in this cold winter. Initially, it did not happen often, but now it happens most of the time. Secondly, the geyser of the shared bathroom has stopped working unexpectedly once again which is creating a lot of trouble for all the flatmates, especially in the morning when we have to take a shower.
I appreciate that you have sent a mechanic in the past, however, the problem still persists. One of the flatmates is a mechanical engineer and after meticulous examination, he found out that the thermostat of the heating system is not working properly whereas in case of the geyser its heating coil is rusted. I would request you to please replace those parts.
Even though we love this place for its serenity, but if you would not fix these problems we might consider moving out as it is almost impossible to bear the cold weather which is about to come in the Christmas season. None of us wants to risk our health.
We await your prompt response.
Yours faithfully,
Alex Barns
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 187, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put before the verb 'happen'.
Suggestion: often happen
...this cold winter. Initially, it did not happen often, but now it happens most of the time. S...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, whereas, as for, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 252.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69841269841 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62974007838 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626984126984 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.8326157725 44.8134815571 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0769230769 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 4.34317383033 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164110615115 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475876787559 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04023866763 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.077603005464 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469600929963 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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