You are studying overseas. You need to return to your country before the end of the semester for a family event. Write a letter to your supervisor. In your letter include Request time off, Explain why you need to leave early, and reassure him/her that your studies will not suffer.
Dear Ms. D'souza,
I am Priya Prakash from Supply Chain Management course. I am writing this letter to get permission for my leave in the last two weeks of this semester that is from 15th March to 31st March 2019.
During this time I have to visit my country to attend my sister's wedding. The wedding is 4 days long but there are some religious rituals which we have to do before and after the wedding. My sister's wedding is very much important to me and my family.
Just to make sure that this event will not affect my studies, I've already taken the modules from our institutes' website. I've also enrolled for the online examination which I will be able to give from my home in India. I hope that my regular presence and good grades in the previous exam will allow me to travel back to my country. I ask you to please consider this letter and let me take time off.
Yours Sincerely,
Priya
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Suggestion:
... take time off. Yours Sincerely, Priya
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 729.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36526946108 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19774347325 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640718562874 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.507845207 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.9 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.3 4.34317383033 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11437678351 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518165305156 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648200043219 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0619997074792 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240747548846 0.0580467560999 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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