You are studying overseas You need to return to your country before the end of the semester for a family event Write a letter to your supervisor In your letter include Request time off Explain why you need to leave early and reassure him her that you

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter with regard to my leave for moving to India.

There is a wedding in my home of my beloved sister Amy, due to which I need to go home from 1 to 7 August. Actually, she had just completed her masters and got placement in Google, California. Moreover, my uncle found an overseas boy for her, because of this entire family thought getting her married now, as she will not able to return before 2 years. Since, my father passed I was the one who looked after her and I cannot miss this ceremony. Even, Indian marriages are really lavishing and without my presence it will be a daunting task for my mother.

For studies, I had also aligned myself so that it could not be impacted. I will be in touch with Smith and Aron on whats app to know what is going on. Moreover, I assured you that I will be submit my assignments without any extension. A day after wedding I had already booked my return tickets, hence will reach on time.

I hope you will give due consideration to this letter and bear me for absence.

Yours sincerely,
Tim Cook.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 116, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
...will be in touch with Smith and Aron on whats app to know what is going on. Moreover,...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, hence, if, look, moreover, really, so, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 889.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42288557214 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38865042445 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661691542289 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.9995210688 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0833333333 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16386804657 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060440459542 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495198896377 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105566372199 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373602544279 0.0580467560999 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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