Dear Mr. Harry,
I am writing to ask for some days off next week. I actually went to see my dentist last weekend due to incessant tooth ache and the x-ray revealed that I have an undergrowth, beneath my lower right cavity, on which the last two molar teeth
rests.
The surgeon will only be available on the 22nd and 23rd of October to perform the operation on me as he is traveling out of the country for a month and will not be back until November ending . If everything goes as planned, I should be back in the office by the following Monday.
As regards my job, Miss Vera has agreed to take on my responsibilities for those two weeks, as we actually share same job role. Any job she cannot handle, I will attend to them though the company's intranet and I would put in extra hours when I resume if occasion warrants it
I hope the short leave will be granted so I could attend to my health.
Yours sincerely,
Favour Blessing
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... If everything goes as planned, I should be back in the office by the following M...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, so, as regards
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42285714286 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43083561288 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.702857142857 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.0987697202 44.8134815571 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.571428571 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 16.8248392259 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0704746400939 0.216113520407 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364231601587 0.0766984524023 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352213827214 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0312487834626 0.12726935374 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234479268618 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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