You are working overseas in an international company. You traveled back to your home country without informing your office friends. Write a apology letter to these friends.Apologies to your friend.Explain the situationWhat you enjoyed most working with th

Dear friends,

I'm writing this letter to all of you to apologize for leaving this country for home country without informing any of you. It is making me sad to say goodbye to all of you.

I am leaving this country for Bangladesh, my home country due to the health condition of my father. As I am the only child, my parents are completely dependent on me. Although, I asked my parents to live here with me, but they want to live in their countryside only. That is why I was thinking about leaving this job for my home country. I was about to leave this job few months later but, my father's health condition forced me to take decision now. That's why I'm leaving in such a short notice.

Leaving behind a group of friend is always hurtful. Surely, I'll miss my association with you people. I was lucky to have colleagues like you by my side.

Thank you all for being nice to me the whole time.

With warm regards,

Abed

Votes
Average: 7 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear friends, Im writing this letter to all of you to ap...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...ndition forced me to take decision now. Thats why Im leaving in such a short notice. ...
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Line 5, column 461, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...rced me to take decision now. Thats why Im leaving in such a short notice. Leav...
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Line 7, column 61, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...up of friend is always hurtful. Surely, Ill miss my association with you people. I ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4161849711 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33694782487 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595375722543 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2029053419 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.7692307692 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3076923077 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.538461538462 4.34317383033 12% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166352132518 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632039523951 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772968574855 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122616792561 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859468441131 0.0580467560999 148% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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