You arranged a delivery to home. But there are some problems with the delivery. Write a letter complain to the manager of the delivery company.
In you letter, you should write
• describe your order
• describe the problems with the delivery
• suggest what the shop should do
Dear Sir,
I wanted to complain about the bad experience that I recently felt because of your company. I was highly disappointed even after getting all the tracking information about my product. But, still the delivery man caused me so much of inconvenience to get my stuff and even that was broken. I will elaborate further ahead about this matter.
A few days back I ordered a book for my upcoming recruitment examinations. The book was about the UPSC Civil services written by Kiran publications from an online store called Amazon. It was about to arrive on 24th of this month later in the evening. They provided me the tracking details of your company named Fedxpress Pvt Ltd. Everything was right on track and all the necessary details were available.
The problem that I faced was when the delivery executive asked me to confirm the address. In spite of all the things mentioned on the order ID about me. I still complied with his request even after this still my order was not delivered and unnecessarily cancelled.
I called on the company office but got no satisfactory response about my delivery. I request you to please check this matter and arrange my delivery as soon as possible. As, this is a matter of my life as the exams are near and I need to prepare to qualify them.
Please take some action against the employee whom my product responsiblity was given and I am attaching the details about my stuff.
Thanking you,
Yours faithfully,
XYZ
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I wanted to complain about the bad exper...
^^^
Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...atisfactory response about my delivery. I request you to please check this matter...
^
Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e details about my stuff. Thanking you, Yours faithfully, XYZ
^^^
Line 8, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tuff. Thanking you, Yours faithfully, XYZ
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1212.0 937.175257732 129% => OK
No of words: 255.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75294117647 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6807414033 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607843137255 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.605997918 44.8134815571 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.2941176471 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.82352941176 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127167428739 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458429533683 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585729609312 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0662595069483 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435227166415 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.