You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain the important even apologize for the situation suggest a new arrangement
Dear Abhinay,
I believe you are doing well, I regret to inform you that I have to change my vacation schedule due to the baby shower of my sister in law which is held on 5th January 2020. As you know I am the oldest son in my family and how important a role is brothers-in-law in this ritual.
I extremely sorry in advance to reschedule my trip, as far as I know, you already submitted your leave application in your office and I really apologize for this inconvenience.
I request you to please revise all the tourist places booking one week behind. I am traveling on 10th January now in place of 30th December. If possible then, please request your management to revise your leave application dates, I want you to stay with me for one week during my holiday trip to Canada.
your loving brother from another mother.
Yours truly,
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: ,  
Dear Abhinay, I believe you are doing well, I r...
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Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: sister-in-law
...n schedule due to the baby shower of my sister in law which is held on 5th January 2020. As y...
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Line 13, column 80, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...tourist places booking one week behind. I am traveling on 10th January now in pla...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, then, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 745.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 151.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93377483444 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34340685077 2.54303337028 131% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655629139073 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.8500973845 44.8134815571 200% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 149.0 76.5299724578 195% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2 16.8248392259 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 4.34317383033 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173060155304 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08692571092 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493013279448 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104269159442 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287763677392 0.0580467560999 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 8.37731958763 202% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 70.7449484536 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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