Dear John,
Hope this letter finds you well? I recently bought a ticket for big music concert which will take place in wembly, manchester.
You know i am a big fan of the Rolling stones and i could not miss this. Unfortunately i am not able to go and i was thinking if you are willing to go.
Although i thought i arranged everything within the company, there is an important load coming on Wednesday at 7pm which is the same time when the concert starts. Hence as the Manager of the logistic department i am obligated to be there. I booked the ticket two months in advance and could not wait for my favourite band to play. But sometime things does not go as they are planned.
I would be happy to give you the tickets. I remember the last time we were in a concert together. There are other musicians besides rock bands, i know about your preferences on pop music and there will be other singers like Madona, Justin Bieber and Britney Spears. The tickets are in form of QR code, if you are interested kindly apprise me and i will send the code through whats up.
See you soon
Thanking you,
Yours truly,
David
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... place in wembly, manchester. You know i am a big fan of the Rolling stones and ...
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... am a big fan of the Rolling stones and i could not miss this. Unfortunately i am...
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...nd i could not miss this. Unfortunately i am not able to go and i was thinking if...
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.... Unfortunately i am not able to go and i was thinking if you are willing to go. ...
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... if you are willing to go. Although i thought i arranged everything within th...
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...e willing to go. Although i thought i arranged everything within the company,...
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... the same time when the concert starts. Hence as the Manager of the logistic departme...
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... the Manager of the logistic department i am obligated to be there. I booked the ...
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...are other musicians besides rock bands, i know about your preferences on pop musi...
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...ou are interested kindly apprise me and i will send the code through whats up. ...
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...ise me and i will send the code through whats up. See you soon Thanking you, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, if, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46634615385 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37037758677 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644230769231 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8982433509 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.4615384615 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291874131797 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925498450033 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703176849699 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142131261733 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521277705157 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.