You experienced an incident on public transport that caused you distress. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter
– describe the incident
– explain how this incident affected you
– suggest what could be done about it.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter with regards to an incident happened during my recent travelling in the TTC bus which has mentally disturbed me.
Actually, while travelling in TTC bus number 102 from Scarborough to Eglinton station on 25th October, instead of worrying about ongoing pandemic situation, the bus driver allowed more than 35 passengers to board in bus. Not only this, he broke the guideline of government and allowed many passengers without a face covering mask or shield.
I am much worried about the situation because on that day 2-3 passengers were feeling cough and within 2 days of my travelling, I have been feeling cough, cold and high-grade fever which are common symptoms of covin-19. As I am living with my family, this may spread corona virus to other family members. This has really disturbed me a lot.
I would appreciate if you could train TTC staffs to follow guideline provided by the health ministry of Canada government to avoid spreading of corona virus, and take strict actions against drivers who do not follow it. In addition, if you restrict numbers of passengers to be travelled in one bus, the same incident would not happen in future.
Hope you would understand seriousness of this issue and take appropriate actions.
Yours faithfully,
John Smith
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 335, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...bus, the same incident would not happen in future. Hope you would understand seriousne...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, may, really, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1104.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04109589041 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65122664655 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.684931506849 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.7645325362 44.8134815571 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.4 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151351566332 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599826637089 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521820342724 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883554032684 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546248789874 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 8.37731958763 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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