Some people prefer to spend time with their own age group while others like to spend
their time with different age groups. Discuss both approaches and give your own opinion.
Although it is preferred by few people to spend time with people with similar age group, there are others who give preference to pass time with elders or youngers. In my discourse ahead, this essay will outline both arguments of the topic and reasons of my belief that spending time with same age group is better.
On the one hand, it is opined by a group of the society to enjoy with others having same age in order to enjoy more. To be more precise, people having similar age have same interest and thought process. This would make it possible for them to mingle with each other easily, and they feel more comfortable. A good case in point is a report published in Toronto Times in 2018 revealed that more than 40% youngsters of western countries such as the Unites States of America, Canada and France like to have company of their age only for better enjoyment.
On the other hand, others who have different view and believe to spend time with different age groups to learn more from their valuable experience. This is because of the fact that most of the elders have seen various difficult situations in their life and learned a lot while the young generation is technically more sound than others. So, by engaging with each other, both could enjoy and develop numerous significant skills. Take for example, in India the toddlers and older citizens like to enjoy time with each others as both could learn about countless incredible lessons of life and upgrade the knowledge.
In conclusion, while the preferences given by people to spend time are different, I believe that people enjoy more with similar age group because of same interest, hobbies which certainly would help them to mingle with each others easily.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78929765886 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32851350559 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.832653314 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.181818182 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1818181818 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.441001363068 0.244688304435 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187456564595 0.084324248473 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130588591334 0.0667982634062 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.311319757931 0.151304729494 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0952117479606 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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