You forgot something important on the bus you traveled on. Write a letter to the bus company and say
– Describe what you are looking for.
– You phoned the company before, but their response didn’t help you (explain why).
– What do you want the manager to do about it?
Dear Sir or Madam,
I traveled by one of your public transportation vehicle from Ikeja to Agege on the 25th July, 2016 and forgot my international passport in the bus. The trip was scheduled for 7:30 am and we were about eleven passengers in an eighteen-seater, blue, Toyota Hiace motor. I guess it may have dropped from my pocket, when I tried to bring out my ticket to present to the car attendant, prior to our departure.
The item has a green cover and contains about thirty-two leaves. It is in a booklet form, wrapped in a black pouch, and inside one of the leaves are my personal details such as full name, date of birth and state of origin. It doesn't contain my contact details, however.
In a bid to recover it, I contacted your organization. I called the Agege office and was told that indeed an international passport with the details I provided was found in one of your automobiles, but, in line with your company's procedure, I have to provide my trip ticket before the document can be given to me. Unfortunately, I tore and disposed it the minute I disembarked from the bus. It did not occur to me that there will be any need for it in the future.
Therefore, I write so you could use your good office to release the passport to me. I understand that the check put in place is to ensure that the item is not given to the wrong person. In view of this, you may ask your staff responsible to use my driver's licence as a means of identifying me as the true owner. I have also gotten a court affidavit an a police report to backup my claim and will present it to whoever will be attending to me. I have an examination that requires the presentation of my international passport before I will be allowed to take it.
I will be waiting for your response as I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Okoronkwo Alfred Chinedu.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'July 2016'.
Suggestion: July 2016
...vehicle from Ikeja to Agege on the 25th July, 2016 and forgot my international passport in...
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Line 9, column 356, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'an' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: an; a
...r. I have also gotten a court affidavit an a police report to backup my claim and wi...
^^^^
Line 9, column 375, Rule ID: CAN_BACKUP[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to back up'?
Suggestion: to back up
...en a court affidavit an a police report to backup my claim and will present it to whoever...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...before I will be allowed to take it. I will be waiting for your response as I ...
^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'as to', 'i guess', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.213367609254 0.220444632235 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.167095115681 0.167888034529 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0437017994859 0.0606518309736 72% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0282776349614 0.0506257000042 56% => OK
Pronouns: 0.131105398458 0.118615021944 111% => OK
Prepositions: 0.105398457584 0.107062808482 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0308483290488 0.041066498444 75% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.83816328314 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0488431876607 0.0385302599488 127% => OK
Particles: 0.0025706940874 0.00132118243153 195% => OK
Determiners: 0.0796915167095 0.0714148451538 112% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0231362467866 0.0191574576366 121% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00514138817481 0.00930345855455 55% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1870.0 1141.60824742 164% => OK
No of words: 342.0 206.134020619 166% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46783625731 5.53046319177 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 3.78085437643 114% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.266081871345 0.284621296913 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.19298245614 0.211203875043 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.12865497076 0.133321485273 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0847953216374 0.0843313296314 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83816328314 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 127.690721649 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543859649123 0.622163163488 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 58.7664025935 62.8969750728 93% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 12.9587628866 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.1176470588 16.4300151701 122% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7717204846 44.7399317507 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 90.9928171075 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1176470588 16.4300151701 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.588235294118 0.613754768223 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.09278350515 191% => OK
Readability: 39.4158926729 37.5504026743 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.07086614173 1.13073093955 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265456667361 0.331212695627 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0835398978062 0.0927372745006 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0597168808948 0.0736520305886 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.595652709843 0.579516596996 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.188603324794 0.180689518051 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100389664263 0.122183219658 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650192567056 0.0765303033291 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.24529801454 0.211926503985 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.166606178988 0.0737400523855 226% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136533337071 0.203819188451 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735679395192 0.067151250289 110% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.45360824742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.48453608247 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.0206185567 249% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 4.73195876289 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 1.03092783505 97% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.56701030928 273% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 8.32989690722 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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