You had borrowed money from your friend when you were facing some financial problems and forgot to pay it back Write a letter to your friend and in your letter Apologize for being late in returning the money Explain what happened Say how you are going to

Essay topics:

You had borrowed money from your friend when you were facing some financial problems and forgot to pay it back. Write a letter to your friend and in your letter:

• Apologize for being late in returning the money

• Explain what happened

• Say how you are going to fix the issue now

Dear Rakesh,

Hope this letter finds you in the best of spirits. I am writing this letter to not only thank you but also to request your forgiveness.

First of all, I adore your gesture for lending me a fortune of the amount when I was in dire need. To be honest, I have been feeling guilty that I delayed to repay my debt and sincerely apologize down from my heart and I mean it.

For six months my life has been a rollercoaster and I am dealing with plenty of personal as well as professional problems.

On top of this, I had a few other bills to pay back against both house loans and personal loans.

I would really like to refund your cash as soon as possible. To overcome this issue, I have applied for an advanced salary from my organization and would be expecting the money in a couple of weeks. Apart from this, I invite your family for lunch.

I hope you understand my situation and accept my apologies.

Yours truly,

Sudheerkumar

Votes
Average: 7.6 (7 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 148, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'delayed repaying'.
Suggestion: delayed repaying
...nest, I have been feeling guilty that I delayed to repay my debt and sincerely apologize down fr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, well, apart from, i mean, as well as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52272727273 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52604588232 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642045454545 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.990275712 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3636363636 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 4.34317383033 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269895342944 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10168837598 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562106776464 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111397329227 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764764188268 0.0580467560999 132% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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