You had just missed a friend s party write a letter to apology In your letter you should apology to your friend explain why you couldn t attend the party say what steps you will take to avoid in future

Essay topics:

You had just missed a friend’s party, write a letter to apology.

In your letter, you should:
apology to your friend
explain why you couldn’t attend the party
say what steps you will take to avoid in future.

Dear Preetam,

I am writing this letter because I am not attending to your birthday party unfortunatily, I got emergency call my home town. I have shocked that new because my grandfather admitted in hospital for the reason heart attack, so I am not attending to you this party occasion, In my absence you enjoy the party with your family and other friends. I am so sorry that I missed your party, I am already special plan your bithday and purchased unique gift for you but the last moment emergency come and change my mind. I am really sorry I not inform you, I saw the picture facebook, instagram and video you looking nice on your birthday. I would like inform you my grandfather he is recovered and back to home. during days I was very busy in hospital.
Hope you understand this situation. I promise to you not again repeat in future if any problem this similar situation again I will inform you.

Your,s sincerly

amit mishra

Votes
Average: 8.4 (29 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rgency call my home town. I have shocked that new because my grandfather admitte...
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...shocked that new because my grandfather admitted in hospital for the reason hea...
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Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...her admitted in hospital for the reason heart attack, so I am not attending to y...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...asion, In my absence you enjoy the party with your family and other friends. I am...
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Line 3, column 347, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ty with your family and other friends. I am so sorry that I missed your party, I...
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Line 3, column 515, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ment emergency come and change my mind. I am really sorry I not inform you, I saw...
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Line 3, column 634, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ideo you looking nice on your birthday. I would like inform you my grandfather he...
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...ather he is recovered and back to home. during days I was very busy in hospital. Hop...
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... busy in hospital. Hope you understand this situation. I promise to you not aga...
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...ion again I will inform you. Your,s sincerly amit mishra
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 12.0 26.3917525773 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63095238095 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54939857742 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613095238095 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6531516722 44.8134815571 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4444444444 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298671046663 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128056052309 0.0766984524023 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602802373134 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230601390246 0.12726935374 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02005999702 0.0580467560999 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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