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You have been attended a job interview which went well, but you are still waiting for the decision. Write a letter to the HR manager of the companyGive details of the jobWhy do you think the interview went well?Why do you need to know the result?

Essay topics: You have been attended a job interview which went well, but you are still waiting for the decision. Write a letter to the HR manager of the company
Give details of the job
Why do you think the interview went well?
Why do you need to know the result?

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Dear Mr. Hardie,

I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to express my concern about the results of a recent interview session that had been conducted at your company premises, for an executive.

The interview was related to the recruitment for a post of junior HR manager, in the electronic firm at Manitoba. For the eligibility criteria, the interviewees should have in-depth knowledge regarding various electronic appliances, along with experience and qualification.

Fortunately, I have had all the necessary documents to take part in the interview. I have got positive feedback in all the sessions such as presentation, one-on-one interview, and speaking. Moreover, the interviewer Mrs. Julia Smith was impressed with my CV as I have 8 years experience in a renowned company as an assistant manager. Therefore, I am pretty sure that I would get a confirmation letter for that particular job.

Nevertheless, I would like to request you to send the result of the interview, at the earliest. I have a keen interest to join your firm. Although I got joining letters from other companies as well, so I could able to respond to them accordingly.

Anxiously, waiting for a prompt response.

Yours sincerely,
Mathew Winds

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, therefore, well, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1059.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26865671642 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17070418294 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641791044776 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6882122026 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6428571429 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3571428571 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245816692802 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770215693129 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543984378271 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131039699844 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575940078367 0.0580467560999 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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