You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work.
Write a letter to the manager of the organization where you have been working in your letter
Dear Sir/Madam:
I am Amir Nazaripoor who is your volunteer work force in your organization since you established your company. My duty is teaching to under 10 years old children who want to learn English language as a second language. Unfortunately, at this moment I cannot continue my work. I know that this farewell annoying my heart, yet I have to go because I should immigrate to another city which is far away, for continuing my life with my parents. Fortunately, I have a good song, my childhood friend Mr. Rezai wants to join to your community instead of me. He has an IELTS certification with high score and has a good experience on teaching to children, I promise you that he can help you more than me.
Finally, I would like to thank everyone from the organization who stood by me during my tenure and specially you for providing guidance and exceptional support.
Your kind consideration would be highly appreciated.
Sincerely yours
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ideration would be highly appreciated. Sincerely yours
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, second, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86503067485 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97437840055 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.711656441718 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.313058897 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.125 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231079086788 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968955542937 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652490826119 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116455645796 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06685589981 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.