you have been studying French for one semester at university, but have decided to change your language course to English. Write a letter to the
Dean of studies, Professor Andrews
-explain why you wish to change your course of studies
-ask if it is possible to transfer your fees for the rest of the year without paying additional costs
Dear Professor Andrews,
I am writing with regard to a French course that I took at the Harvard University and now after one semester I feel as if I was not successful in it and consequently decide to change my course to English.
My name is Rahi Honarvar, and I have studied French for one semester. Unfortunately after a few sessions I realized that this course was not appealing to me and all the grammar and vocabulary were overwhelming. So I wonder if it is possible for me to change the course to English.
I have a few question about this transmission. Firstly, I need to know if it is feasible to transfer the tuition fee that I paid at the time of registration for English course. Secondly, I wonder if it would be possible to transfer the money, is there any other charges that I should pay?
Thanks for your consideration and I am looking forward to your swift answer.
Yours sincerely,
Rahi Honarvar
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 10, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun question seems to be countable; consider using: 'few questions'.
Suggestion: few questions
...ange the course to English. I have a few question about this transmission. Firstly, I nee...
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Line 10, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o your swift answer. Yours sincerely, Rahi Honarvar
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, i feel, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6303030303 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89539706268 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9998917045 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8888888889 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 4.34317383033 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339748331017 0.216113520407 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121910363478 0.0766984524023 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828661242523 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149743643452 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818271307559 0.0580467560999 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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