Dear Reena,
I Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to tell the reason why I have not return you dress that I borrowed from you. I really apologize for this mistake. I am in so guilt that I do not know how to tell you the truth. Finally I dared for this.
To be honest, I have never thought that this could be happened with me. Although this has happened unintentionally but I am feeling very bad. I know it was one of your favorite dress and close to your heart as It was gifted by your father.
I borrowed this from you on occasion of my brother’s marriage. Everyone loved it a lot. When I was having a coffee there. Someone kicked me in a rush and whole cup of coffee was splashed on the dress. I tried to clean it with water immediately but stains of coffee did not removed.
Now I have send this dress to the dry cleaners for cleaning. They assured me that dress will be fine . It will be available to me by next week and then back it to you soon.
I am really sorry for this mishappening. Hope you forgive me.
Best wishes
Gurjeet kaur
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 167, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...u. I really apologize for this mistake. I am in so guilt that I do not know how t...
^
Line 2, column 230, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
... do not know how to tell you the truth. Finally I dared for this. To be honest, I ha...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 89, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...er’s marriage. Everyone loved it a lot. When I was having a coffee there. Someone ki...
^^^^
Line 6, column 274, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'remove'
Suggestion: remove
...mmediately but stains of coffee did not removed. Now I have send this dress to the d...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 12, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'sent'.
Suggestion: sent
...f coffee did not removed. Now I have send this dress to the dry cleaners for clea...
^^^^
Line 8, column 101, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... They assured me that dress will be fine . It will be available to me by next we...
^^
Line 8, column 106, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... assured me that dress will be fine . It will be available to me by next week an...
^^
Line 8, column 134, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...be fine . It will be available to me by next week and then back it to you soon. ...
^^
Line 12, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing. Hope you forgive me. Best wishes Gurjeet kaur
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, really, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 32.9175257732 155% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.21739130435 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34358603963 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570048309179 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.3138527367 44.8134815571 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 45.9473684211 76.5299724578 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.8947368421 16.8248392259 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.10526315789 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254537502813 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750068881583 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662468880587 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137956496978 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576519476411 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.9 8.37731958763 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.71 70.7449484536 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.7 7.45979381443 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.01 8.71597938144 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.42 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 167, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...u. I really apologize for this mistake. I am in so guilt that I do not know how t...
^
Line 2, column 230, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
... do not know how to tell you the truth. Finally I dared for this. To be honest, I ha...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 89, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...er’s marriage. Everyone loved it a lot. When I was having a coffee there. Someone ki...
^^^^
Line 6, column 274, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'remove'
Suggestion: remove
...mmediately but stains of coffee did not removed. Now I have send this dress to the d...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 12, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'sent'.
Suggestion: sent
...f coffee did not removed. Now I have send this dress to the dry cleaners for clea...
^^^^
Line 8, column 101, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... They assured me that dress will be fine . It will be available to me by next we...
^^
Line 8, column 106, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... assured me that dress will be fine . It will be available to me by next week an...
^^
Line 8, column 134, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...be fine . It will be available to me by next week and then back it to you soon. ...
^^
Line 12, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing. Hope you forgive me. Best wishes Gurjeet kaur
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, really, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 32.9175257732 155% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.21739130435 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34358603963 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570048309179 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.3138527367 44.8134815571 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 45.9473684211 76.5299724578 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.8947368421 16.8248392259 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.10526315789 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254537502813 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750068881583 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662468880587 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137956496978 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576519476411 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.9 8.37731958763 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.71 70.7449484536 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.7 7.45979381443 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.01 8.71597938144 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.42 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.