You have borrowed something from your friend for a party and unfortunately it was damaged. Write a letter to your friend to apologise and say
– What and when did you borrow?
– What happened to it? Why?
– What do you suggest to do about it?
Dear John,
I am writing to thank you for your generosity in lending me your tape recorder that I needed for my birthday party and besides I should apologize for the damage that happened during the party for the recorder. As you may remember I borrowed it on Tuesday, 23th of July since I needed it for my party and I was supposed to give it back on 26th of July.
At first everything went well at the party and all the guests were moving with the music and they had fun but unfortunately there was some fluctuations in electricity which caused some damages. First, the lights went off and I thought it would be OK in a few seconds but to my surprise I realized that some of my devices were damaged due to this problem such as my fridge, TV and the tape recorder and they all didn't work properly. I asked the council for compensation and they assure that they would pay for all the damaged items.
I would like to buy a new tape recorder for you. Although it was not my fault and it was just a bad luck, I'd much prefer to compensate it for you and replace this tape recorder with a new one. I need to know if you want exactly the same brand and model or you prefer a new one.
Once again I am intensly sorry and I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes,
Rahi
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 412, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
..., TV and the tape recorder and they all didnt work properly. I asked the council for ...
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Line 6, column 107, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...ot my fault and it was just a bad luck, Id much prefer to compensate it for you an...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, look, may, second, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 5.05154639175 297% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 248.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.1935483871 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29202571841 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54435483871 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 330.3 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.0642562224 44.8134815571 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8 16.8248392259 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2039495753 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859308934487 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636755790491 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128877024248 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780118160946 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.32 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 8.62886597938 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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