You have a complaint about the hotel you stayed at while attending a seminar in a foreign country. Write a letter to the seminar organiser and say
– What problem did you face there?
– Why do you want to complain about it?
– What is your suggestion for improvement in the future?
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction about the hotel which accommodated me during the seminar for international surgeons organized last week in Los Angeles.
As you have already known, all guests were arranged to stay at the Grand Lotus. On the second day of my 3-day stay, I called for room service to clean up my room in the morning and the staff confirmed. However, when I got back in the evening after the seminar session finished, I found that my room was still such a mess. I reported to the support staff immediately but they claimed that they had never received my call.
For a reputable hotel with a 5-star rating, I would expect everything to be perfect for guests. Therefore, my bad experience at this place is completely unacceptable, especially when I chose to pay for the VIP service package myself.
I would suggest that the hotel trains their staff more strictly and professionally so that no guests will encounter my experience in the future. Moreover, the managers of the hotel can install smart systems to note every order of customers because human staff may be absent-minded sometimes.
Yours faithfully,
Truong
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, may, moreover, second, so, still, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96464646465 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83569105525 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671717171717 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5332397003 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 4.34317383033 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155842271902 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565672609852 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511713969453 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084277611542 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386881480839 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.