You have decided to leave your current employment. Write a letter to your employer the following in your letter.Explain why you are writingWhy you have decided to leave the jobTell your employer what you plan after leaving your present employment.

Essay topics:

You have decided to leave your current employment. Write a letter to your employer the following in your letter.
Explain why you are writing
Why you have decided to leave the job
Tell your employer what you plan after leaving your present employment.

Dear sir

I am writing this letter to express the reasons of my job leaving as well as future plan. I am Urvashi working as a senior executive manager in sales department from last 3 years.

I am happy to advise you that I got selection certificate from Quebec which is the prominent state of canada. Therefore, I am resigning from your prestigious company. As you know that one year ago applied in fradral process for getting optimum opportunities in overseas job sector . My financial condition is not so good I burnt mid night oil for earning bread and butter for my family. In this peak time, presence of this job is desperately required. Fortunately, I got selected and next month on 24th april I will join my new job. Hence, relieve my with in one week.

After releving, firstly, I will do all prior works like depositing fee, shopping etc, . After that when I will be there I will deposit my all documents for the upgradation and according to my evaluation they will surround me with the job as per my potential and assessment. I am very keen to go abroad as this is the golden change to explore new ideas and achieve towering success in the field of commercial.

As per my request, you are requested to accept my resignation and nourish me with my experience certificate. I know this is the short period notice but I hope it will not effect our relationship.

Now I am look forward to hearing from you .

Yours faithfully
Urvashi

Votes
Average: 9 (4 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...sales department from last 3 years. I am happy to advise you that I got sele...
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...years. I am happy to advise you that I got selection certificate from Quebec ...
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...he prominent state of canada. Therefore, I am resigning from your prestigious com...
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...As you know that one year ago applied in fradral process for getting optimum opp...
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... applied in fradral process for getting optimum opportunities in overseas job se...
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...mum opportunities in overseas job sector . My financial condition is not so good ...
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...es in overseas job sector . My financial condition is not so good I burnt mid nig...
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...butter for my family. In this peak time, presence of this job is desperately req...
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...me, presence of this job is desperately required. Fortunately, I got selected ...
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... is desperately required. Fortunately, I got selected and next month on 24th ap...
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...4th april I will join my new job. Hence, relieve my with in one week. After...
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... I will join my new job. Hence, relieve my with in one week. After releving...
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... my new job. Hence, relieve my with in one week. After releving, firstly, ...
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...y with in one week. After releving, firstly, I will do all prior works like...
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... one week. After releving, firstly, I will do all prior works like depositin...
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... do all prior works like depositing fee, shopping etc, . After that when I will ...
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...ior works like depositing fee, shopping etc, . After that when I will be there I...
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...rks like depositing fee, shopping etc, . After that when I will be there I will ...
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...be there I will deposit my all documents for the upgradation and according to my ...
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...ding to my evaluation they will surround me with the job as per my potential and ...
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... as this is the golden change to explore new ideas and achieve towering success ...
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...change to explore new ideas and achieve towering success in the field of commerc...
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...eld of commercial. As per my request, you are requested to accept my resignati...
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...know this is the short period notice but I hope it will not effect our relationsh...
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Line 9, column 174, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
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...t period notice but I hope it will not effect our relationship. Now I am look for...
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Line 11, column 42, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...ow I am look forward to hearing from you . Yours faithfully Urvashi
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...o hearing from you . Yours faithfully Urvashi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, so, therefore, well, you know, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 258.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64728682171 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74957542186 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62015503876 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 290.88556701 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8086250079 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9375 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.125 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9375 4.34317383033 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 2.54639175258 1060% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113982975292 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045647314701 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572040131883 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0627511424773 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304278771913 0.0580467560999 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Sentence: I am happy to advise you that I got selection certificate from Quebec which is the prominent state of canada.
Error: canada Suggestion: Canada

Sentence: As you know that one year ago applied in fradral process for getting optimum opportunities in overseas job sector .
Error: fradral Suggestion: gradual ???

Sentence: Fortunately, I got selected and next month on 24th april I will join my new job.
Error: april Suggestion: April

Sentence: After releving, firstly, I will do all prior works like depositing fee, shopping etc, . After that when I will be there I will deposit my all documents for the upgradation and according to my evaluation they will surround me with the job as per my potential and assessment.
Error: releving Suggestion: relieving
Error: upgradation Suggestion: No alternate word

flaws:
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2

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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 258 250
No. of Characters: 1147 1500
No. of Different Words: 160 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.008 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.446 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.654 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 76 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 60 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 35 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.125 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.481 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.349 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.65 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.121 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5