Studying alone is considered better than in group. Discuss both views give your own opinion.

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Studying alone is considered better than in group. Discuss both views give your own opinion.

Education plays a phenomenal role to uplift the standard of knowledge as well as living. Presently, individual study is thought to be lucrative instead of collective study. Here, I will throw light on both the aspects with my own perception that we should balance both sides to get best out of it.

To begin with, role of individual study is beyond comparison . To be specific, juveniles c AZ n accumulate a great deal of comprehensive knowledge in the depth of any topic. Thus, alone study allows them to explore new ideas with their own potential. As a result, they become more confident and self dependant can achieve optimum opportunities in coming years. Moreover, having silence at the time of study surrounds them with massive knowledge regarding any topic as it does not allow them to waste a bit of second.

Numerous points can be mentioned in the favour of group study. Firstly, availability of peers nourish offsprings with enormous experiences. It enrich them with the chance to reveal their instinctive expression in front of friends. Hence, group study opens the door of towering success. Apart from it, every person of the group is responsible for others therefore they flourish each others with excellent skills of study. Eventually, grouping is the best way to achieve exceptional key points of study.

From my notion, both thoughts have their own significance. As, children can cover various topics while studying alone. On the other hand, they learn from the mistakes and achievements of their friends in group. Thence, I strongly believe we should try to learn from the merits of both sides and it can become a mile stone for their future.

To conclude, after a great deal of thoughts and deliberation it is considered that each coin has two sides. However, individual study works as a strong piller whether grouping allows them to learn from others but I believe collaboration of both sides works like a boon in success.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, apart from, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00306748466 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73846679805 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576687116564 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0204103548 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.55 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16253866848 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501138798697 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041053242999 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093616820018 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0104647854188 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.