Many people believe that the age of shopping malls is coming to an end, soon online shopping will completely replace retail stores. Explain the reasons for this and give your own opinion.
Millions of people around the world are changing the way they shop. There are two main kinds of buying products which are online shopping and physical shopping. These days remote shopping is increasingly becoming popular among customers which lead many people to think that in the near future this trend will entirely take over the role of retail stores. From my point of view, I think two main factors of this are the achievements of technology and many advantages of online shopping. However, I believe that it cannot completely take the place of brick and mortar shops.
Since the advancement in technology, it is showing an impact on different walks of life including the way of shopping. Online shopping completely depends on modern technology and many scientists have been working on this to develop for a long time simultaneously in the field of shopping malls has fewer people who actually care about its improvements. For example, one part of online shopping is the gadgets called drones that deliver products to the right next the door by flying in the air. However, customers cannot buy all type of commodities through the use of drones as the weight it can carry is limited.
Another main cause of why remote shopping is replacing physical shopping is due to many benefits of it. Purchasing products online take a fraction of time and does not demand any additional effort. In order to purchase merchandise, all clients have to do is to just click the buttons and make payment via their pc or phones comparing to retail stores that consume much time. Also, the products shoppers bought are delivered themselves which does not require any additional physical activity. For instance, I frequently use online shopping and recently I have bought the headphone that took only two minutes to purchase. But, despite the many merits of remote shopping, it cannot completely replace physical shopping. Because there are still some products such as clothing that many purchasers often find difficulty obtaining these products online since it is impossible to check whether the size suits or not.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that in spite of the achievements and many better aspects of online shopping it cannot entirely replace brick and mortar shops.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, so, still, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1896.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06951871658 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62926553653 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534759358289 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8167780034 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.529411765 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300046457549 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928991906 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683261248871 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192797330429 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346713542482 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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