You have decided to leave your current employment. Write a letter to your employer. Include the following in your letter:–Explain why you are writing– Explain why you have decided to leave the company– Tell your employer what you plan to do after le

Essay topics:

You have decided to leave your current employment. Write a letter to your employer. Include the following in your letter:
–Explain why you are writing
– Explain why you have decided to leave the company
– Tell your employer what you plan to do after leaving your present employment

Dear Mr. Clooney,

I am writing this letter to inform you that I have decided to resign from the company with effect from 1st of September 2018. I am supposed to serve a notice period of 1 month however I am writing this letter much in advance so the company can find my replacement while I am here so I can hand over all my job responsibilities to the new person.

I have always enjoyed working in our company and would never have resigned had I not received this offer in the city where my parents live and where I grew up. It is a great job opportunity for me and more importantly gives me a chance to stay with
my Parents who are in their mid-seventies now.

The job offer is from Ernst & Young and it is a senior audit manager’s position and will also handle some corporate finance clients also. I have learnt a lot in the last 5 years I have worked here and my seniors have always given me opportunities to express myself and I am taking this learning and experience into the next employment.

Kindly accept my resignation and do let me know what the exit formalities are.

Yours sincerely
AJ

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... responsibilities to the new person. I have always enjoyed working in our comp...
^
Line 5, column 249, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...portantly gives me a chance to stay with my Parents who are in their mid-seventie...
^^^
Line 8, column 138, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...o handle some corporate finance clients also. I have learnt a lot in the last 5 year...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45631067961 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68850888075 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621359223301 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.4967173464 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.75 76.5299724578 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 16.8248392259 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158927450243 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733069985914 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067494903382 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0582141445321 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479876685883 0.0580467560999 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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