You play sport (e.g. football) for a local team. You recently heard that a player in your team is in a hospital. Write a letter to your team-mate. In your letter:
– Say how you feel about the news
– Ask about the treatment in the hospital
– Suggest some ways of cheering him/her up
Dear Jonathan,
I am extremely sorry to hear that you are hospitalized since the past one week. I was informed by our coach, Mr. Klopp yesterday that you suffered a major fall during one of the league games and had multiple fractures in your ankle and knees fracture and I did not know about this since I am traveling and will be back in another 2 days.
I will come and visit you as soon as I am back but wanted to check how the recuperation is going on and I am sure that the cast must be in place now and you must be feeling slightly better. How many fractures did you have? How are the facilities at the hospital in terms of doctor attendance, nursing and food? Were you on lot of painkillers and antibiotics? When are you likely to get discharged?
I will come and visit you day after tomorrow and since the coach told me you were in a nice private room with a television and gaming consoles, I am thinking of bringing some latest movies and some new games so we can play some games and you can also watch movies in the night. If the hospital policy allows, I can also stay with you in the night to give you company.
Please take good care of yourself and see you soon.
Best wishes,
AJ
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... and will be back in another 2 days. I will come and visit you as soon as I am...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 5.05154639175 317% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27391304348 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32850747689 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586956521739 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.3804259716 44.8134815571 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3636363636 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9090909091 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54545454545 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223958485186 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901863828064 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373643019891 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129930027612 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03621965867 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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