You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course.
Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter,
describe the situation
explain why you cannot continue at this time
say what action you would like to take
Dear Sir,
My name is Gohar Yab Khan and last week I took admission in your evening course of "Primavera". I am doing job
as a Civil engineer and working on a construction site. My official timings are from 7:00 am to 5:00 pm which
can be extended in case of concreting. My current project is in a critical stage and needs to be completed within
6 months to avoid penalties. The routine will become more hectic with the passage of time. The classes
which i took last week made me realise that it needs energy but nature of my job drains it, making it difficult
to concentrate on the course. Therefore it is not possible for me to continue the course at this time.
I believe that after completing this project I should continue the course .
Please try to understand the situation
Yours sincerely
Gohar Yab Khan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 47, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e is Gohar Yab Khan and last week I took admission in your evening course of &apo...
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Line 6, column 103, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ic with the passage of time. The classes which i took last week made me realise t...
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Line 7, column 7, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...he passage of time. The classes which i took last week made me realise that it ...
^
Line 8, column 31, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ifficult to concentrate on the course. Therefore it is not possible for me to continue t...
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Line 9, column 74, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...his project I should continue the course . Please try to understand the situation...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 696.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 148.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7027027027 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88626500031 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662162162162 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5765163019 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3333333333 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4444444444 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13188256983 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545209857348 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365507233582 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.053186492366 0.12726935374 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535502962052 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.