YOU HAVE A FULL TIME JOB AND ARE ALSO DOING A PART TIME EVENING COURSE. YOU NOW FIND THAT YOU CAN NOT CONTINUE THE COURSE.
WRITE A LETTER TO YOUR TUTOR. IN YOUR LETTER,DESCRIBE THE SITUATION,EXPLAIN WHY YOU CANNOT CONTINUE AT THIS SAY WHAT ACTION YOU WOULD LIKE TO TAKE.YOU SHOULD WRITE ATLEAST 150 WORDS.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter ti have your attention about my problem that i decide to quit my job. Let me explain in detail.
I am having a part time job at your restaurant as a waitress since may but besides it, i also work for BC company as an official accountant. At first, i do 2 jobs for my living cost that i can buy a new house in this city. but now, the tremendous workload me me exhausted so i want to quit this job. I have no choice but making this decision and it may suprise you a little bit.
I will fine another waitress to take up my position and pay the compensation if you seek for it. In the future, my family will come to your restaurant frequently to have a meal. I hope you will accept my letter in this week.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Your sincerely
Lisa
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ve your attention about my problem that i decide to quit my job. Let me explain i...
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Line 9, column 15, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...e explain in detail. I am having a part time job at your restaurant as a waitress si...
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Line 9, column 152, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ny as an official accountant. At first, i do 2 jobs for my living cost that i can...
^
Line 9, column 188, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...st, i do 2 jobs for my living cost that i can buy a new house in this city. but n...
^
Line 9, column 224, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...hat i can buy a new house in this city. but now, the tremendous workload me me exha...
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Line 9, column 257, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: me
... city. but now, the tremendous workload me me exhausted so i want to quit this job. I...
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Line 9, column 276, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... tremendous workload me me exhausted so i want to quit this job. I have no choice...
^
Line 9, column 368, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
... this decision and it may suprise you a little bit. I will fine another waitress to t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, look, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 679.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24375 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37558380982 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2644069958 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.7272727273 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5454545455 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291523572386 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107238300989 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050809500906 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166271268037 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038535385679 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.72 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.21 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 41.2886597938 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.