You ordered a new chequebook from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing.
Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the chequebook. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear sir,
I am writing this letter to request your solution to my problem. Let me explain in detail.
I ordered the new cheque book at your bank 2 weeks ago at counter number 5. I was firmed that i will get my cheque just 1 day after my order but until now, i have receive nothing. I feel very uncomfortable about your service. I called the Customer service Department last week and they said that my cheque book was on processing. Please tell me how long I have to wait for it and what action you will take on my problem. I hope you will deal with it urgently and call me when my cheque is ready.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Lisa
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to request your...
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Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... at counter number 5. I was firmed that i will get my cheque just 1 day after my ...
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Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'received'.
Suggestion: received
...ay after my order but until now, i have receive nothing. I feel very uncomfortable abou...
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Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... but until now, i have receive nothing. I feel very uncomfortable about your serv...
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Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... very uncomfortable about your service. I called the Customer service Department ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 532.0 937.175257732 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 127.0 206.0 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.18897637795 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.35699682299 3.78020617076 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25598452542 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 127.690721649 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.692913385827 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 161.1 290.88556701 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.1576417558 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.1111111111 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1111111111 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269679006165 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102656593028 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065960760823 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152009700094 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0901077017127 0.0580467560999 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 8.37731958763 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.43 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.57 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 41.2886597938 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.