You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter :
1) Say why he/she would not enjoy going to college.
2) Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her.
3) Suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her.
Hi Lisa,
I hope that everything is OK over there. I am a bit busy but it is good. In answer your letter, i have some idea
Firstly, I don’t think you should go to college instead of finding a job. it will take you 4 years to finish your study and we are not sure that you can have a good job after graduate. Recruits does’n concern that you are Batchelor or doctor, they just focus on your abilities, your qualities. So, the degree is not important now if you think it will help you to fine a job.
Secondly, in my opinion, seek for a job is good for you. In 4 years while your friends are still study in college, you have a career, you accumulate more experiences which will aid you more in the future to meet success. Therefore, find a job is a good idea.
As i said before, tourist is a best choice to you due to your enthusiasm and energetic, you will learn more when you travel to some place. I hope this opinion will answer your questions. Considering everything to make a decision.
Love u
Lala
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... In answer your letter, i have some idea Firstly, I don't think you should g...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...go to college instead of finding a job. it will take you 4 years to finish your st...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'studied'.
Suggestion: studied
...In 4 years while your friends are still study in college, you have a career, you accu...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...re, find a job is a good idea. As i said before, tourist is a best choice t...
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...dea. As i said before, tourist is a best choice to you due to your enthusia...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...everything to make a decision. Love u Lala
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 838.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31958762887 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4814328055 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59793814433 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9145144632 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.4615384615 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9230769231 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262888973083 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872171589674 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774765841 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152040424817 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637929076496 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.18 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.