You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.
Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter:
• Give details of your visit to the restaurant
• Explain the reason for the celebration
• Say what was good about the food and the service
Dear sir or madam
I am writing this letter to thank your restaurant with your food and service, which make me satisfied.
Last sunday i have a meeting at your restaurant with my peers so celebrate my birthday. I am so anticipated about my 18 birthday because it mark the milestone that I will be an adult so I want that day must be great. I heard information about your restaurant through my sister, who had come to already and very enjoy the food. Therefore, i invited all of my close friend to the celebration and had a memorial night at your restaurant.
The thing that i impressed most was your food and your services. I order steaks, some fish, noodles, and some vegetables. All of the cuisine tastes very well and it was laid down fastly. The waiter was so kind and helpful during our dinner. At the end he gave me a voucher and flowers to celebrate my birthday, i feel so delighted. we gave him some tips when we checked the bill to thank him.
In general, we are so satisfied about your restaurant and will come back soon.
Your sincerely
Alice
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: marks
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ady and very enjoy the food. Therefore, i invited all of my close friend to the c...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...ht at your restaurant. The thing that i impressed most was your food and your s...
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Suggestion: All the
...ome fish, noodles, and some vegetables. All of the cuisine tastes very well and it was lai...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...r and flowers to celebrate my birthday, i feel so delighted. we gave him some tip...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...brate my birthday, i feel so delighted. we gave him some tips when we checked the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, therefore, well, i feel, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47179487179 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53783468044 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5764979463 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0769230769 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270667497427 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988003093277 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793803765892 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181689236086 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744142502055 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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