You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion and you were very pleased with the food and service Write a letter to the restaurant manager In your letter give details of your visit to the restaurant explain the reason for

Essay topics:

You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.
Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter:

give details of your visit to the restaurant
explain the reason for the celebration
say what was good about the food and the service

Dear sir or madam,
I am the guest who came to your restaurant with friends last Sunday night. Honestly, I was really impressive your food and your service that why I am writing this letter to show how satisfied I am and thank for your service.
Last Sunday is my best friend birthday, we wanted to make her a surprised so we need some things special more than a normal dinner. We booked private room for 6 pax with the special requite for the birthday decor and songs. We come at 7 PM and we were amazed by the décor of the private room, it looked like a paradise. We really glad to see my best friend very happy and surprised. Moreover, the food very tasty so we ordered more. The staff were nice and take care, even the chef came to us to take our feedback and introduce more about the cuisine. One thing more than our expect was that the gift from your restaurant, the birthday cake was excellent. We all agreed that we have memorable experience in your restaurant. We will come again and really appreciated your food and your staff for good service.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'pax' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'paces', 'paxes'.
Suggestion: paces; paxes
...al dinner. We booked private room for 6 pax with the special requite for the birthd...
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Line 3, column 320, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rivate room, it looked like a paradise. We really glad to see my best friend very ...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
honestly, if, look, moreover, really, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37055837563 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28527896231 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604060913706 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4970637896 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2727272727 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218647679708 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838467279963 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596722672739 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200914185832 0.12726935374 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759227261587 0.0580467560999 131% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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