You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter
• describe the situation
• explain why you cannot continue at this time
• say what action you would like to take
Dear Raj Sir,
I am writing this letter to convey my decision that I decided to discontinue the medical microbiology course because I have full day job and it is getting difficult to manage both things. After working full day, it become uneasy to attend classes in the evening.
Currently I am performing the duties of 2 supervisors, as another mate has resigned from the post last month. Therefore, I have to follow his roles and responsibilities also till the vacant position is filled. In addition to this, weekends are also busy because of my music classes. Hence, I have no time to relax and enjoy; as a result, I have decided to take a break from the course.
I would request you to refund my tuition fees as I have attended only 1 week. As per the policy of your institute I can demand refund 100 percent fee till 15 days of the course start. Further I want to know the procedure of refund claim.
I look forward to receiving your reply as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely,
Vishal Bhat
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Raj Sir, I am writing this letter to convey my de...
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Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...both things. After working full day, it become uneasy to attend classes in the evening...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...on fees as I have attended only 1 week. As per the policy of your institute I can ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...as soon as possible. Yours sincerely, Vishal Bhat
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, so, therefore, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60220994475 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6206604466 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662983425414 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.393262226 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7272727273 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179417325069 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514252739602 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451461143314 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812133126772 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346610874624 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.