Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regards to the recently circulating news about the construction of new apartments in the public park near my residence. This morning on my way to work, I read about the plan on the hoarding installed by the builder.
Let me explain my concerns in detail. Firstly, since the park is situated at a prime location the construction will cause extremely loud noise and lead to terrible traffic jams. Secondly, during winters, many migrating birds fly to this park to seek refuge as it is also a home to a variety of flora and fauna. Lastly and most importantly, the park is the only open space in the area where children can freely play.
Therefore, I would request you to start a petition to curb the plan. Furthermore, keeping the well-being of the neighborhood in mind, I can guarantee that everyone will support this initiative. Hoping you consider the situation favorably and act immediately to prevent any unpleasant situations.
Looking forward to your reply.
Your Faithfully,
Mary Smith
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97714285714 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83058514179 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.697142857143 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7915800051 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1818181818 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 4.34317383033 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244891417861 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778265900071 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521578250427 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121502092986 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453898521886 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.