You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
Say how your work could be done while you are away
Ask for his/her help in arranging it
Dear Mr. Ryan Lee,
I am writing this letter to express my interest regarding the leadership internship available in our head office in Singapore. Since, I am due for a team manager promotion I would like to receive all the mentoring and guidance to help me carry out my responsibilities smoothly.
Let me explain my situation in detail. Firstly, I have no team management background and would like to take this opportunity that came at an unexpectedly right time to develop my skill. Secondly, I will carry my laptop to ensure that my daily tasks are not compromised while I am away. Thirdly, I will schedule weekly conference calls thereby keeping myself updated and informed with the team's performance.
Last but not the least I will require an authorization letter stating that I am a suitable candidate for the position. Furthermore, the human resource department also needs to be intimated so that they can make the required travel and staying arrangements.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Mary Smith
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 389, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teams'' or 'team's'?
Suggestion: teams'; team's
...ng myself updated and informed with the teams performance. Last but not the least ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 31, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'require'
Suggestion: require
...mance. Last but not the least I will required an authorization letter stating that I ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15294117647 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.027303664 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7602345053 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 4.34317383033 230% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133799341556 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547907188568 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439516786084 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0797033021902 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344312312247 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.