You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping center near your home. Write a letter to the council:
- How you heard about the plan?
- Explain how you feel about it?
- Ask for more information about it?
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing with regard to the construction of a shopping complex which is about to start in the following month. Since this complex is close to my house, I would like to know more about it as well as explain my concern regarding its construction.
Initially, people of my society were talking about the making of a shopping centre nearby; however, it did not think much about it until I saw a huge billboard confirming the claims of the residents.
As this construction is going to take place nearby my house, I have mixed feelings about it. Even though this complex may bring convenience in terms of purchasing goods, I am worried about the resulting noise due to traffic surge and from huge machines operating ceaselessly.
I have a few questions about this building. Firstly, is this building going to occupy the adjacent playground which is used by colony people for recreational activities? Also, does the construction work would stop at night or will continue throughout the specified timeline?
Please respond at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Alex Barns
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, regarding, so, well, talking about, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13186813187 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88609590473 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659340659341 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.889343228 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 4.34317383033 235% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185019152342 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729986491461 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438288477169 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937243987738 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035587394855 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 8.71597938144 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.