You have invited a friend to come to your house to have dinner but unfortunately, you now have to change the day and time.
write a letter to your friend. in your letter
Tell your friend about the changes to your dinner plans.
Explain why you need to arrange the dinner.
Suggest another time for organizing the event.
Dear Peter,
I am so sorry whether invite you to my house for purposes of dinner or unfortunately my invitation had altered due to pandemic situation following the government declaration.
You know that my birthday ceremony has been observed every four years because of leap year. My parents already invited their relatives to the event of my leap year celebration. You are also astonished that the anniversary program is being held not only in the presence of my relatives but also my parent's colleagues those who are government employees. However, at this moment, the authority proclaimed that mass people may not come out publicly, even they imposed laws and orders on social occasions during the pandemic circumstances.
We are not knowledgeable absolutely regarding the declaration of the government decrees. So our parents have decided which function ma be observed a few weeks later while the authority withdrawing their social distances, the congregation. Then we again rearrange my dinner party to commemorate peacefully.
I hope that the circumstance will be overcome within next week, then select a sound day, I may invite to you.
Again, I am extremely sorry for my invitation.
All the best.
Xprisla
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 322, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...es but also my parents colleagues those who are government employees. However, at this ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, may, regarding, so, then, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.85567010309 337% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28205128205 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02974949221 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682051282051 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3114397923 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6363636364 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0997808294815 0.216113520407 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0346871152105 0.0766984524023 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335989618734 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0583715457277 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382264491934 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 70.7449484536 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 8.71597938144 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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