You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter.
1. Introduce yourself
2. Describe your plans for the party
3. invite your neighbour to come
Hello Tina,
I am Priyankaa residing in your opposite flat. I am glad to introduce myself to you. I have moved to this place since last week.I came to your home to meet you, but unfortunately i was not able to see you.
I am planning to have a party this weekend at my place. I would like to invite you and grace the event. My friends will be joining the event and we are planning to have a rock dance event, due to which we will be procuring a new amplifier.
I hope this may cause some noise and disturb you. It was our long day plan to have a rock dance, i apologize in advance if it may hinder you.
I hope you will also enjoy the party. Expecting your arrival at 9 AM. We can have rock dance event followed by lunch.
Please consider my invite in person and join us.
Thanks,
Priyankaa
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
.... I am glad to introduce myself to you. I have moved to this place since last wee...
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Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ave moved to this place since last week.I came to your home to meet you, but unfo...
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Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ave moved to this place since last week.I came to your home to meet you, but unfo...
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Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...our home to meet you, but unfortunately i was not able to see you. I am plann...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fortunately i was not able to see you. I am planning to have a party this weeke...
^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...tunately i was not able to see you. I am planning to have a party this weeken...
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Line 5, column 57, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... have a party this weekend at my place. I would like to invite you and grace the ...
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Line 6, column 97, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...our long day plan to have a rock dance, i apologize in advance if it may hinder y...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 655.0 937.175257732 70% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.19871794872 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22001348978 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608974358974 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3706103201 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.5833333333 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283082325205 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955293604757 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620976541597 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147489019282 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839476791969 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.9 8.37731958763 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.19 8.71597938144 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.